HAYDS510's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sean and Justin]

i like

lol were did you get the banjo kazooie music!?
i fkn want it!

they way you's were drawn was cool..so artwork good and animation.
i was worried when i saw that dudes made cartoons bout themselfs it would be another one of those gay ones where they go to public places and act like laid back king shit fellas when in RL they are prob wierdos that hang out in a basement but in this it was just self satirical and pointless with humour and thats why it was good :D
mic seemed a bit fuzzy sometimes but good voice acting
9/10 5/5

[Stamp on the Ground]

Not bad!

i can see you put allot of work into this!
its cool the variety of characters from different stuff..
could kind of predict which characters i'd see.. very typical of you kinda peeps..
but there was some ones like the dudes from road to eldorado..lol..didn't expect them so that helped you there..
nice job on the frame by frame work too
one suggestion though (doesent really matter) but it would add to the visuals if you had the squares light up every time someone stepped on them or something.. i saw it happend when the alien was meditating.. that all the time though would look good.
the music in it.. not my cup of tea, if you listen to the lyrics in dance music, they sound real dumb like some foreign guy rhyming all the English words they know.. but then being the game is a dance game i couldn't picture it with any other music so it suits it and i guess its not that bad..
i know what your sayin bout the background.. would be distracting but what you could have is just little light spread out patches of colour sliding across really slowly over the blue, just to add to the visuals once again. nothing heavy but it gives the feeling theres more going on.

goood effort 8/10 4/5

[Waiting for the Bus!]

thhhat

That was like a mid-day movie..
lol.. good work, nice story
too bad it went to crap for the runner..
10/10 5/5

[Adventure Prohor and Puzo]

hmmm

sweet stuff!
i prefer the older work though, this seems kinda like it breaks from your old work a bit. the color schemes and everything, i think go back to the black and white kinda stuff with a few pale toned colors here or there.. like what you did in Bankomat, or the worms hazard, something like those.
but still your moving of the camera angle look is always the same which is good, and the smoothe flow. good work

[Children's Day]

coool

every movement is silky and flows smooth.
as it is in all your stuff. i dont know how you do it!
great work again, realy enjoy watching these.
10/10 5/5

[Tarboy]

that was sweet!!!

story 10/10
characters 10/10
voices 10/10
art/animation 10/10
music 10/10

holy shit!!!!
that was really cool! i was enjoying that piano music at the start when the old man was telling his grandson about the robots that got thrown into the tar pit..
and it matched everything so well, and the voices were awsome.
animation and art/scenery everything was perfect..
you got a good imagination, im glad people still submit stuff like this.. i was gettn worried for a bit.
Great Work! 10/10 and a 5/5

[Werbung Taschenwärmer]

what!????

its for a school project so i understand its gonna be the language suited to wherever you live but the majority of newgrounds users (i'm guessing) dont speak german.. i didnt have a clue what was happening, it looks like an ad for chewing gum made from trees? well anyway next time around atleast see if you can cram some English subtitles in there, or even speak english and put german subtitles, whatever works for you. animation could have been a bit better, it was very basic and minimal but u say its for a school project, school is known to make people try a large % less ..so.. lol keep practicing i think

TheMatths responds:

Ok you might be right... the next vids I will try to translate...

The school project by the way is a parody of a German crime series called "Tatort". The vids I post here are the ads we put in...

[Global Warming 4 Dummies]

alright

wasnt bad but wasnt top of the line either, good work for a first submission anyway. ___ for dummies stuff could work, i like where your goin there and it'd be cool if you make more submissions like this. . but only things i suggest to get onto are the artwork and the humor.. maybe just a bit more detail and work on the tweening.. with the jokes try not to drag them out too much and just think through the lines a lil more. + one thing people do is add where it could of been funny and kill it.. example would be the bit with the asian guy that was following the ozone to mars and you were like "and the chinese guy comes too" or whatever, scene change straight away.. dont sort of break then go "yess.." because shows your ackowledging your own joke too much and makes it kinda tacky u know what i mean?
your style kinda reminds me of 'Teen girl squad' on the homestarrunner website..
but its cool this wasnt too bad keep at it & GL